literature

Keep Walking.

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Don't turn back again
you will be fine, keep walking
someone is out there waiting
you will be fine, keep walking

If you stop you'll want to turn back
you will be fine, keep walking
Eventually he'll stop following you
you will be fine, keep walking

Turn back now and you'll get hurt
you will be fine, keep walking
Go forward and there is recovery
you will be fine, keep walking

Mentally and physically you'll be better
you will be fine, keep walking
Don't stop you can do this
you will be fine, keep walking

Don't let them see the tears fall
you will be fine, keep walking
Don't let the others control you
you will be fine, keep walking

Hush now and put up your head
you will be fine, keep walking
love your self and you are loved
you will be fine, keep walking
...wrote this a couple of days ago...not sure whether or not i'd post it...it's...i dunno...it symbolizes many many many things right now...:(
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Little-Red-Hat's avatar
The use of repetition in this piece is interesting. It's like the narrator is really trying to hammer home the point or reassure themselves, as if they're saying all this in their head. The stress/boldness in the final line portrays this, too. I think that this is an experience a lot of readers can relate to.